Rewriting is the essence of writing well: it's where the game is won or lost. That idea is hard to accept. We all have an emotional equity in our first draft; we can't believe that it wasn't born perfect. But the odds are close to 100 percent that it wasn't. Most writers don't initially say what they want to say, or say it as well as they could. The newly hatched sentence almost always has something wrong with it. It's not clear. It's not logical. It's verbose. It's klunky. It's pretentious. It's boring. It's full of clutter. It's full of cliches. It lacks rhythm. It can be read in seven different ways. It doesn't lead out of the previous sentence...The point is that clear writing is the result of a lot of tinkering.
William Zinsser, On Writing Well, originally published in 1975
William Zinsser, On Writing Well, originally published in 1975
U are wrong ,in 1984 I was in Trenton with her, then went to Clinton,(in Flemington /Clinton area)with her was there when her eyes were gouged.1984 not 1980
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